Ok, so i noticed all of these new players joining don't really know how to post, using the '-' symbol and '*', so I might as well help you learn about this. It'll make learning and posting on WLZ a lot easier.
Alright, so when you are posting, you don't want to say things like "-she walks over to Blackstar-" Or "*She catches the vole*" And don't use "I" Either. Your character is not you, the character is the cat you are following. Use things like (if you were me, xD, use your own name)
Ex:Ripplestar pads over to Blackstar and dips her head. "Hello Blackstar" She purred.
Understand? I don't want everyone confused on how you post. If you ever need help, you can message me, Blackstar, and moderators or anyone who's been on for long enough to understand WLZ. Make sure you read everything before you post, too, or you might get confused. Thanks!
Post by Xx.Blackness.xX on Sept 14, 2011 17:55:21 GMT -5
True Ripple. Good post. Also, make sure your posts aren't just short little moments. This is not a limited little text box. These posts will stay up. Make them worth reading. Also, making yours words italic or bold when your character is speaking helps alot.
Yup. I remember posting using - on HL. xD It was the popular thing, yo. ^-^ Now people are 'advanced', and use full snetences, yet I don't see how this makes them any more advanced then they were, otherwise using more words and punctuation?
Yea, CAPITALS is also important, and grammer. - hey, we should do a workshop on this! For example, I'll use something like ripple did.
blackstar went over to ripplestar. hi she said. ripplestar nodded. ripplestar walked away.
instead, a more polished sentence would be: Blackstar went over to Ripplestar. "Hi." She said. Ripplestar nodded, and walked away.
BUT we could still improve it, for example:
Blackstar aproached the Iceclan leader cautiously. "Hi," She mewed, eyeing the fellow leader. Ripplestar glanced up, then shrugged and padded away.
And more complicated words and grammer structures could be tried out to create the effect you want - a leader approaching another, trying to make a conversation, and then the other leader walks away. That is what the sentence is, stripped to the minimum. But you have to send that across to all who read it.
Adding details always makes what you post more fun to read for other people. And make sure to keep the same personality. You can't be all fun and nice at one point, and suddenly change into a territorial, hostile charrie unless something basically MAKES you. ^-^
If that is the personality of the character - to be sensitive but also strong-ish - then sure, it makes a character less predictable. But generally "better" characters keep to one "outlook" on life. Cloudstar being an exception.
Truthfully, you can't just change everything in the middle of your charrie's life. xD Again, if you were some sweet little innocent cat at first, then you just DECIDE you want to be different and change that, it's a no-no. xDDD
Cloudstar, on the other hand, has gone through some traumatic times. She's only an exception because she has an excuse.
True, especially once they've grown up and become a warrior/med cat... when they're kits they DO change, from little squabbling/quiet things to more mature adults. (Windpaw, Fawnpaw, etc)
Windpaw's a good example. She had a quiet nice kit life until her father died, changing her into a more mature cat in just a day.
Fawnpaw, on the other hand, has not changed much. Though she is more mature, I have to say that attitude of hers may never disappear. Get on her good side and she may be the nicest cat you've ever met, though. ^-^
Fawnpaw has kinda changed... she's less.... dramatic. Berry and Fawn used to HATE their dad, but now shes ok-ish and shes normal and kind and listening.
xDDD MOSTLY. I miss you RPing Berry. v.v That was awesome. ^-^ xD You're the person who remembers the whole past, anyways. :/ But Bubble is fine. :3 She just needs to get on more. -_- And she IS less dramatic, isn't she?
Sorry for not knowing to past nobody ever told me. and as for not getting on I didn't have any internet I was in the middle of no where at a lake in wisconsin
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